Ashes ~ 5 Minute Fiction

ashes

Black ashes
Floating up and whispering back down
Burned for some time
The edges holding the flame
Before sneaking its way and making holes
Nothing remains of you
But a scent of black ashes

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2 Comments Add yours

  1. leandrajwallace says:

    This is very good, and I really like how you described the flames on the edges. It has such a sad feel to it.

    1. Thank you very much Leandra 🙂

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